
Topic Sentences?
Tell me which sentences are too VAGUE....too SPECIFIC...and which ones are FOCUSED
1)When i think of marriage, I want someone with that certain something.
2)Some people start smoking due to peer pressure.
3)Saturday morning television is designed to sell small children a lot of worthless junk.
4)Computers are the wave of the future.
5)Everything I know about cars I know because of my old sisters.
6)Organized sports teach kids about discipline and time management.
7)I like to lie under a shade tree on a warm summer day and take a long nap.
8)What we call "flu" is a virus.
9)Gardening is one of my favorite pastimes.
10)Women: can't live with them, can't live without them.
My best guess would be:
Too Vague: 1.2.5.7.9
Too Specific: 3.6.8.10
Focused: 4
Good Luck
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